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I find it
disconcerting
that
you are the King
of my own Head
& that I am
subjugated
by my own
temptation

My bones, your
welcome mats,
cushioned
to your insatiable
satisfaction

--

I find this
discomforting,
your  constant
rebirths in my
libido, despite
three years of
silent therapy,
false recovery
& worshipping
     the wrong  gods

you are the best muse
for struggling artists
everywhere & worst
case of the bubonic plague
since the bubonic plague

--

I find you
disenchanted
in the middle
of any where,
peeling flesh,
lulling  sullen
sirensongs at
3AM

I shot a flock
of  phoenixes
& ate Adam's
poison apple
yet
I remain ignor
ant  and ignor
ed by you

--

I find Nothing-
decontaminate
your stovepipe
& leave me be.
I had one of those dreams again. You were there, naturally, pretending you had better places to be, better thoughts to soil, better people to bless with headaches.

--

this stays between me & winter plathogens
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-02-05
:iconnuclearrevolution:
NuclearRevolution Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Somehow his is like my favorite poetry ever, and I don't understand a word of it. But I feel like at the same time I get what every feeling laced in the verses. Like reading some random language and persuading yourself that you pretty much know what it says.

You don't.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
ohai thank you :)) it's probably hard to understand because ofhow specific it is
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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello! :wave:

I have used your beautiful deviation as part of my title poem project entry, found here: [link]

Have a great day! :heart:
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
wow that is a rather impressive collage of titles :3
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:iconliliwrites:
LiliWrites Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations!!! :heart:
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
thank you for the suggestion <3
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:iconj-goth:
J-Goth Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
This is REALLY good.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
thanks <3
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:iconlostinthemorning:
LostInTheMorning Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This gave me chiils. I love it.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
thanks <33
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:iconlostinthemorning:
LostInTheMorning Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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:iconfeatherback:
featherback Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I needed to read something like this today. <3 My biggest congratulations on the DD! This has to be one of my all time favorite poems.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
omg thank you so much ^_^
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
congrats you d!ck <3
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
holy what. woah.
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:iconrowena-jordan:
Rowena-Jordan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013   Traditional Artist
I needed to read this. Its perfect. 'I shot a flock of phoenixes & ate Adam's poison apple' has just stuck with me. Favourite!
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
awh thank you :))
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
thank you =) !!!
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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:iconmichaelgarcia7:
MichaelGarcia7 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
thanks :)
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:iconmichaelgarcia7:
MichaelGarcia7 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
You're very welcome!
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:iconevalyhn:
Evalyhn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Yes! I know exactly how this feels!
Damn, youve got me under your thumb with the first stanza. Too much to relate to, too deeply.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
awh thank you :))
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
congratulations on the well-deserved DD, everything I read by you takes my breath away :heart:
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
woah shit i got a DD ? omg lmfaooooo that explains the slew of messages haha thanks love
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ohmygosh this is the best response ever xD you're so welcome <3 I'm so in love with your stuff
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That second section...:wow: It's perfectly stated.
Also, ...lulling sullen sirensongs :love:

Congrats on the DLD. :clap:
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
awh thank you <3
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :hug:
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:icondailylitdeviations:
DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
thank you <3
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:iconamyflofire96:
AmyFlofire96 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
I love this. You are my favourite poet.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
<3
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:iconspneverbefore:
SPneverbefore Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist
COULD THIS BE ANY MORE PERFECT
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
probably lols
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:iconspneverbefore:
SPneverbefore Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist
WRONG ANSWER
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
DX
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:iconwaitingformilo:
WaitingForMilo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
another instant fave!
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
<3
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:iconoviedomedina:
oviedomedina Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Wonderlovely as always!
Thank you!
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
thanks :3
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:iconashitauchiha:
AshitaUchiha Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Well, it's really nice of you to write a poem about me. :P I think this is the effect I have on most people, but it's hard to say. I'll have to ask my hoard of bitches sometime.

But really, nice poem. The last stanza is esspecialy my favorite. I have to be honest when I say I don't know exactly what it means, but I feel like I get it anyway. It resonates nicely.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
LMAO@the first paragraph :3 it's totes about you. oh and all the i's are capital XD

thanks <3 it's about the same person a lot of my poems are about #_@
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:iconashitauchiha:
AshitaUchiha Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thank you for capitalizing your I's. (At least in the first paragraph, lol.)

I figured. See. You're totally pulling a shakespeare right now. I know it.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
you got 20 more pageviews the day this got a DD from (probably) being the first (other than me) to comment XD lawl the popularity it spreads to youuuuuuu
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:iconashitauchiha:
AshitaUchiha Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
Oh yaaaaaaay!!!!! <3
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
sylvia plathogens.
dat portmanteau.
:iconmicrowaveplz:
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