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you tuck your heart
under your sleeve,
under a wristwatch
from World War I–
the one passed down
generation after
generation after
generation.
you pretend love doesn't exist;
and even if it did, you're immune
to the power of emotion.
your impeccable knowledge says:
love is sundry chemicals in your brain,
it can't hurt you because it's imaginary
and you're so damn smart,
you didn't even need to look
sundry up in the dictionary&
you're so damn smart,
you didn't even need to look
at me to make me fall
for you&fall
in you&fall
apart&fall
off, down
(that's the sound of my liver falling down a flight of escalators)
you wear your watch over your heart,
so when people ask you the time,
you can tell them it doesn't work,
because communication feels
awkward, and you'd rather count
the stars on the back of textbooks
(like me)
and you mock conspiracy theories
(like me)
and you think people are too assumptive
(like me)
but you have no time
for kissing silly boys
(like me)
because your wristwatch
has been stuck on 11:59
since the day i met you,
and you said we'll talk
about it tomorrow, but
oh, subtlety was in vogue
the day your watch broke;
That was near twelve nights ago,
and you still imagine the moon,
counting the stars and seconds
with your broken chronometer.
And you don't care about boys
(like me)
or writers
(like me)
or hopeless romantics
(like me, myself, and I)
But you don't understand
the shit you put me through.
you don't,
do you?
you don't.
do you?
you don't.
Do you
(like me)
under your sleeve,
under a wristwatch
from World War I–
the one passed down
generation after
generation after
generation.
you pretend love doesn't exist;
and even if it did, you're immune
to the power of emotion.
your impeccable knowledge says:
love is sundry chemicals in your brain,
it can't hurt you because it's imaginary
and you're so damn smart,
you didn't even need to look
sundry up in the dictionary&
you're so damn smart,
you didn't even need to look
at me to make me fall
for you&fall
in you&fall
apart&fall
off, down
- Splat!
(that's the sound of my liver falling down a flight of escalators)
you wear your watch over your heart,
so when people ask you the time,
you can tell them it doesn't work,
because communication feels
awkward, and you'd rather count
the stars on the back of textbooks
(like me)
and you mock conspiracy theories
(like me)
and you think people are too assumptive
(like me)
but you have no time
for kissing silly boys
(like me)
because your wristwatch
has been stuck on 11:59
since the day i met you,
and you said we'll talk
about it tomorrow, but
oh, subtlety was in vogue
the day your watch broke;
That was near twelve nights ago,
and you still imagine the moon,
counting the stars and seconds
with your broken chronometer.
And you don't care about boys
(like me)
or writers
(like me)
or hopeless romantics
(like me, myself, and I)
But you don't understand
the shit you put me through.
you don't,
do you?
you don't.
do you?
you don't.
Do you
(like me)
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the loudest lie he ever told
it starts when the clouds break his head and the waves crush his legs. his tears drip on my thigh and the colour of sleep floods my skull. the sound makes me afraid to open my eyes.
the next thing I know I'm naked, holding dry leaves to my chest. this is the thing to do when the boy with skin as frail as paper isn't here to touch me with his blue hands.
I wouldn't mind his lips in my hair if my hair twirled and created pictures of his skin to trace over. I wouldn't mind the wind blowing me through tree branches, through the arms of my lover. I wouldn't mind shivering if it meant holding his hand in the rain. I wouldn't mind my hands tugging
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if you can hear me from there
you are zipping up my jacket
and your hands look broken.
I'm the cold sweat on your forehead
and the copy of the copy
of the last girl who tried to save you.
the truth is, I don't want your bony,
bony fingers to ever change.
now I'm in a small book store
reading Scar Tissue by Anthony Kiedis and
I want to know why the clocks are ticking
and why the walls are breathing louder than the people.
I want to run faster than my heart can handle
on these wet seven a.m. streets.
can't I just collapse and live here until you find me?
we're soaking our hands in the liquids
in our cups in our mouths in our minds
because our drin
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Suspire
She bites her tongue in self-disgust as she traces the words "I love you" down her arm compulsively, (she no longer knows how to say anything else) and runs his white shirt sleeve across her lower lip to wipe away the blood.
It's 3 hours until midnight and she's watching them,
in her bed.
*
There's still a thin film of dust layered across her skin from when he brushed the ashes of her citadel off his shoulder. She knows there's no putting the pieces back together again, not with the smell of his cologne in her nose. Her mosaic walls a soft powder beneath her feet. She doesn't try.
She walks.
*
The cliffs of Ireland cannot win against t
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first of all, I want to say that this is an amazing piece of writing and I hope you do more stuff like this in the future. I always look forward to your submissions but there is something very special about this one, so I'll just break it down or something; "you pretend love doesn't exist and even if you did, you're immune" is what won me over. I think it's a feeling that many people can relate to, and it's also something I think about when people say they don't believe in love. the part about "you wearing a watch over your heart" took an old cliche phrase and put a new spin on it.
the repetitive "(like me)" added a songlike quality and I really enjoyed that. overall, this is a very beautiful poem. please, keep submitting.